Man
Dejected Talkative
Looks Observes Judges
Believing, or maybe not
Adam
Woman
Sad Irritated
Listens Pretends Hopes
But crying from inside
Eve
Man
Half-Full Half-Empty
Laughs Enjoys Thinks
Secretly hoping against hope
Mars
Woman
Dejected Silent
Watches Tries Believes
Laughing at her destiny
Venus
Couple
Disconnected Incompatible
Save Skewing Un-tieing
Releasing themselves emotionally un-
-pair
Dejected Talkative
Looks Observes Judges
Believing, or maybe not
Adam
Woman
Sad Irritated
Listens Pretends Hopes
But crying from inside
Eve
Man
Half-Full Half-Empty
Laughs Enjoys Thinks
Secretly hoping against hope
Mars
Woman
Dejected Silent
Watches Tries Believes
Laughing at her destiny
Venus
Couple
Disconnected Incompatible
Save Skewing Un-tieing
Releasing themselves emotionally un-
-pair
So, I met another Mr. Not-Right-For-Me, today. This poetry woven in forms of Cainquains describes it all.
allah bachaaye meri jaan ki chhutki gundo mein fass gayi ! !
ReplyDeletemundeya to bachke reh... ni tu hune hune hoyi mutiyaar....
can think of these 2 songs as of now for u...
Chilllll and enjoy the phase :)
I love how beautifully crafted these words are..Kudos !!
ReplyDeleteThis one made me cry. I've been here one too many times. The cynicism, the hope (even though I should know better) and the disappointment. Sigh
ReplyDeleteThis made me tear up in sympathy. Haven't we all been here- the soul-deep cynicism, the hope, the heartbreak, the self-abuse all of it. *hug*
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